Based on Seiya’s storyboard production
After a long time, my feedback is as follows:
· I think the zoom-in speed and extent in the first shot are too fast and too drastic.
· In terms of character performance, the speed of putting down the cup is relatively slow. If the speed of putting down the cup can be increased, and then the character leaves the bar for 2-3 seconds (perhaps there is an action where the hand rests on the table and then detaches slowly), it will be better able to connect with the next scene.
· In the final shot, the character leaves the frame very slowly. It’s better to leave the frame as early as possible, leaving 1-2 seconds for the door to swing open and close, and then move the camera focus to the cup.
时隔许久自己feedback：
我认为第一个镜头的zoom in速度和幅度太大了
角色表演方面，放下杯子的速度比较慢，如果能够把放杯子的速度提升，然后留2-3秒角色离开吧台（也许这里有一个手扶在桌子上然后粘滞脱离的动作），能够更好地衔接到下个镜头。
最后一个镜头同样，角色离开镜头速度很慢，尽早离开镜头，留下1-2秒给门关上晃动，然后镜头焦距移到杯子上更好。